Please read the Role-Play andmail me with critics on it

Please read the Role-Play andmail me with critics on it

Post by a.. » Tue, 05 Jan 1999 04:00:00


Greetings RSPWF, I am the handler of Doomsday, currently competes
in UEW, WPCW, MLW, IWE and IWC.

The reason for this post is many a times people have commented on the state
of Doomsday and some even say he is a rip of the Undertaker, that is why, I
have if all goes according to plan come up with a new gimmick for him.

Thus to help me in my decissions if to change the Gimmick of Doomsday
from "Lord of Darkness" to "Hellacious", I would like you to respnd via the
conventional way of electronic mail comments, critcis or anything on the new
gimmick idea.

The Gimmick is this:

Doomsday changes from LOD oto Hellacious. His new gimmick is a character who
wants revenge for the Prophets of Old have told him to extract revenge on the
world and go around spreading the word that the end of the world is nigh.
That's basically it so far.

Anyway I have a sample of the new gimmick below, any comments
please direct to


===========
Sample
============

[The camera opens up outside Destructive Metal, Doomsday is seen in
the distance with what appears to be a new look attire of a radioactive
suit with a skull and cross bones on the front. He is also wearing a
pair of black ski pants with the letters which are red, they read

"Well there's a Will, there's an Explosion!"

The camera then fades as Doomsday begins to speak.]

DD: "For many a time, I never supposed this would happen.
The ending of one great force. The force known unto the world
as the "Lord of Darkness", alas he does depart from you. The
Prophets of Old have foretold to me a deadly game and now it's
up to me to place on the armour and once more go into the battle.
A battle which many shall say, Why? Well the End IS Nigh and soon,
the End shall come!

[Doomsday begins to cough, then continues.]

The ending of the one place that I called home is to be
no more. Destructive Metal shall no longer be there. The
Mortician, he failed me, he failed the prophets and thus
now a mighty army shall arise and cause _WOE_ to all. Revenge
shall be bitter, yet it shall be mine!

The ending of the supreme force which rules many a lands is about
to cease from being. The past has just caught up with me and it seems
as if there is just no way that what can be shall be and thus I call
myself to war with all who dare to stand in the path of the destruction
of civillization. Men fell and likewise, they shall fall again. Doomsday
shall come, _YOUR_ Doomsday shall come and then like a _BOOM!_ you will
know what the end is all about."

[The face of Doomsday then changes from a kind gesture to a
cold heartless smile.]

DD - "Woe, for the end is Nigh. UEW, IWC, WPCW and all others, beware
for the Ides of Terror shall come. The daming of the world shall
fall and then will it be like a chaotic explosion, well soon all
shall know and be acustomed to the great, marvels which I shall
bring. Society shall crumble as I make a bold stand against you
all. I shall cast out all evil, all discontent, it shall be done
in my NAME! The Prophets forewarn a great death, a death which
many shall not see, just witness the effects of it and likewise
as soon as Doomsday comes, there shall be like a Flash in the
Pan, nobody left to tell the story.

Thus as I doth depart from thee, darkness, it guideth me no more.
Light, it shone to brighlty, thus as I grant to thee bad things,
they shall happen. Revenge for the prophets is what is to be done.
Listen to the cries as they wail with pain, wail with joy and wail
with anger for the Ides of Terror shall strike _FEAR_ into you and
then you will know why there shall be a CHAOTIC EXPLOSION!"

[Doomsday then turns to a detonator which is situated on the
ground, he then pulls a plunger and then the sound in the distance
of a _BOOM_ is then heard. A black puff of smoke then is seen over
the horzion.]

DD - "Thus it was to be no more. Destructive Metal, Lord of Darkness,
it is to be no more. Hellacious is what _I AM_, "Hellacious" Doomsday
is what I shall bring wherever I go and now as the morrow falls,
the morrow shall rise, likewise all of you shall know why the
Prophets of Old, fortell great matters and most of all where
there's a Will, there's an Explosion!"

[As the last sounds are heard, Doomsday then with a rage of
fury just as the puff of black smoke from the Mushroom cloud
is then seen evading the scene. Doomsday then is no more.]

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Post by Pulpse » Tue, 05 Jan 1999 04:00:00

I don't approve of this gimmick.

-----
Sean Cox
The epitome of slingo
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Post by big_d.. » Thu, 07 Jan 1999 04:00:00


Quote:

> Greetings RSPWF, I am the handler of Doomsday, currently competes
> in UEW, WPCW, MLW, IWE and IWC.

> The reason for this post is many a times people have commented on the state
> of Doomsday and some even say he is a rip of the Undertaker, that is why, I
> have if all goes according to plan come up with a new gimmick for him.

> Thus to help me in my decissions if to change the Gimmick of Doomsday
> from "Lord of Darkness" to "Hellacious", I would like you to respnd via the
> conventional way of electronic mail comments, critcis or anything on the new
> gimmick idea.

> The Gimmick is this:

> Doomsday changes from LOD oto Hellacious. His new gimmick is a character who
> wants revenge for the Prophets of Old have told him to extract revenge on the
> world and go around spreading the word that the end of the world is nigh.
> That's basically it so far.

> Anyway I have a sample of the new gimmick below, any comments
> please direct to


> ===========
> Sample
> ============

> [The camera opens up outside Destructive Metal, Doomsday is seen in
> the distance with what appears to be a new look attire of a radioactive
> suit with a skull and cross bones on the front. He is also wearing a
> pair of black ski pants with the letters which are red, they read

> "Well there's a Will, there's an Explosion!"

IT'S RADIOACTIVE MAN!

Quote:

> The camera then fades as Doomsday begins to speak.]

> DD: "For many a time, I never supposed this would happen.
> The ending of one great force. The force known unto the world
> as the "Lord of Darkness" *snip*

"Alright brain you don't like me, I don't like you but let's get this over
with so I can go back to killing you with beer!" -Homer

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